Day79's OC (Saffron)

This is Day79's OC Saffron. She asked people to draw her, so I drew her in her Training outfit. I hope she looks okay! Concrit is appreciated! Please do comment!

This is what Day79 wrote:

Saffron: Short red hair that is longer in the front, slightly short, pale, teal/light blue eyes.
Clothes - uniform - black hoodie, black trousers.
Casual - you can design that (nothing revealing, she is shy)
Training - headset, short khaki shorts with white tights underneath, a beige vest/singlet with an army green jacket on top that cuts of just above her belly button, black leather gloves that have cut off finger things. Black boots or trainers/joggers.
Pjs - long light blue trousers with little blue Teddy bears on, a white singlet/vest with another blue singlet/vest underneath, she has a brown fluffy Teddy with a blue polka-dot ribbon around it's neck. She doesn't wear shoes to bed (if feet are annoying to draw, just give her pink fluffy slippers)
Formal - Long green dress that has a split up the side (not too high) sleeveless, but she wears a light see-through shawl, white high heels (cause she is short) the dress sparkles. And any extras that can think of (small like flowers, necklace etc.)